Hey Joe! :) Great to hear from you so soon. You are better at responding to comments promptly and thoroughly than I am. (I am only thorough when I leave my own comments, haha.) That is another compliment.

I hear that you are thinking about how to keep the book tight enough in its focus, while also including nonhuman individuals in the framing to a degree that feels right. You reader eagerly awaits Chapter 2! I am going to learn so much and be inspired. Wishing you a happy week.